rate this please

How good are the lyrics, please, for drama.

~:-:~

In the air there is a star
That lights up the night
In the air they follow all
Ever watching your plight
Stars watch you from above
While you try to find the sun

Stars watch you for always
For you can always find your way
If stars watch you for always
The way to go will always be shown

In the air they light the night
So you see where you are
In the air they’re burning bright
Looking near and far
When they watch you from above
They know all you have become

Stars watch you for always
For you can always find your way
If stars watch you for always
They way to go will always be shown

The way to go will always be shown

~:-:~

What to improve? And does anyone need the tune to tell if it's good or not?

Tune please. Otherewise, you could judge the song anyway you want it (like my DragonForce song lyrics )

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ww8wqEgFIA8
Sorry it'll get confusing with the other words on it.
I think my lyrics are very cheesy. I think I might change the song I'm doing....

It's pretty good! Better than mine anyway. Mine is Yellow Submarine but gayified.

Celia's is the Numa Numa song gayified. XD

I know and it's awesome! "I can't help it, it's just the way I am. It's not so obscene, maybe I have ADD..."

SAM IS WATCHING YOU!!!